Wow, That is really good. Your really talented!! I dont know if you won or not. I hope you did. You deserve it. This was outstanding! I wish i could have read more. Cause i really wanna read it now =[ Ohwell... You did a great job!! 5/5 I LOVED it!

luv natalie x-x

Wow i wasnt going to read this cause it looked so long but i started and couldnt stop it was fantastic wow id really love to see the whole thing well done!!!!!!!!!!
xx ALLY xx

That is an awesome plot - I would love to read all of it and I wish we had come up with something like that for our GCSE Drama assessment - I might have got a higher mark!!! Albeit - there are a few spelling and punctuation errors, but the actual storyline sounds great - and the part you have submitted is excellent. It's easy to get into the story even though the whole of it is not available for reading :) They should make it into a film . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Excellent plot i really liked it :)
You truly are talented, this isnt poetry but it's great
really enjoyed reading it :)
btw thnx for the comment

~StefQ

I'm not surprised you won!! Great script. I really enjoyed reading it.

Again, a lovely poem. well done. keep it up
xxxx

This is a fantastic piece of work! Congrats for winning the award. You really should think about making it into a film...It kind of reminded me of the 'Dead Poets' Society'. I would love to see this on stage....you have the ability to build 3 -dimensional characters with an ease I can't put down to one thing...Lol...I go on too much eh?...simply put- outstanding.

xxx

It was great! 5/5

WOW, its a great story, I wish you could have found the rest of it, I'd love to read the whole thing from beginning to end..... I do hope you've won something with this write. You're quite talented and I am glad you have joined our club. Wonderful write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

That's amazing. No wonder you won an award for it. Very impressive 5/5

~ Tina

Wow, once again I loved it. I love all of your work. This was an awesome peice of work. Keep it up.