Great poem. I can really relate to it. 5/5

Chelseyy

The analogy used here was terrifice. Don't be a stranger on the site ... keep posting.

So, my question to you. Are we, in essence people who have placed too much focus on what we believe we are meant to be, and too little focus on just being? Existing within our surrounding. The people, places, etc. Anyway, just for clarifacation, if you reread my poem, Erase, notice the change of focus in the third verse, beginning the second stanza. The focus is no longer directly toward her, it's toward the audience. I'm seeing, in my mind, her face, but the questions aren't directed toward her face, but rather, toward whoever/whatever is in the surrounding. In this case, pen and pad would probably be the best reference. Great inquiry though. Thank you for your comments. You've been great.