Great poem! I like the variation and it works well..
This line was very smart..
A thousand words were said,
But none were spoken.

^makes you think!

Great work hun
xoxo

This is really a marvellous pice of work here, u said so much w/o saying anything here.
keep it up

all the best and take care
5/5

Nicw write dear! it was different and amazing too...5/5

Bharti

This is wonderful, the lack of rhyming does many favours for this!
I find it hard to write coherently without my old friend mr.rhyme, but u show great talent in moving away to try something new!!

Very well done!

Jon