Comments : Lame

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Hey!! this is really good. i feel like this ALOT!! so i can sort relate!!
    great job!
    love jess XxXxXxX
    check out some of my stuff if you can! thanx

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    *sigh* all these sad poems relate to some people i know SO MUCH
    They help me to understand what they go through
    Thank you
    'unfilled dreams' - great line
    Keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hiya,

    Another great poem, and another poem that I can understand.
    Espcially loved the line:
    "which have left behind
    the crimson stain of life."

    Cheers,
    Laterz,
    Shirlz.
    ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I agree with azlan...your emotions spilled across the page and touched my truly...to delve in such depression brought about some understanding...I hope your feeling much happier....

    [lostlaureate - come find me]