Awww....so sad. Im always here if you wanna talk :):):) . 5/5 as usual .
love you
XxXRaChaELXxX

I loved it, keep up the great work! 5/5

-Steph-

This is great well done, wow

XXXRozieXXX

Wow! thats really sad. It gives the reader a perfect idea of the girll feelings

Good work :)

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Hey that was an awesome peom but i really hope you don't hurt yourself you have such a talent and I'd hate to see that wasted! by the way 5/5 hands down!

I loved that poem...i just hope that u'd never do anything like tht to yourself, but it was a great poem!

Hiya, just wanted to say that i though that poem was very well written and powerful . . . . especially the end

kate xx

Caz that was beautiful (tear) i love it one of the best poems you have ever done. (i want to come home) love ali
still in scotland20/5/06

Awesome poem!! i loved it!