Another great poem done by the wonderfull Kaylee =] This one was beautiful. I love this line
"I know that I could return to
My normal self if I knew who I was."
Thats something i often think to myself. I could get over feeling the way i do if only i knew who i was before this happened! Anywho........Im lovin' your poems. Your a very talented writer. Hope to see more good stuff from you! 5/5 for this one. I LOVED it =]

luv natalie x-x

Crafty! My kind of poem....you definitely cast a spell on me...I'd pick out a stanza but I love it all....keep writing....you rock!

p.s thanks for spotting my errors...much appreciated....pondering over whether to put up more of my material....but....still having doubts...

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Awesome!!!!!!!!! Absolutely amazingly written. well done
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This poem was like wow!
I love the way you intertwined fantasy and sadness
You impress me :)
So many standout lines umm ,
"This smile forced on my lips"
gota be my fav
Keep writing :)

Of course . . .It doesn't need editing, unless you have a good idea :) Your poetry seems to have such meaning, and power, perhaps it's just me but it drives into my mind, and makes me just want to keep writing, so that I can write like you one day :)

Peace. [Sole]

Excellent
5/5

A magician never tells her
Secrets when she performs.
I keep my secrets tucked down
Inside until I feel myself drown.

I really like those lines. the sense of a metaphor. Gosh i know that i spelt that word wrong. im hopeless x) I really love how you compare. it is probaly my favourite verse.