This is good, You could have maby added a bit more to it, Or had a bit of a rhyming scheme to make it a bit more better. But it was still good! 4/5

luv natalie x-x

I like this one really good yourmlook on the positive side very good lov ya always Rach xoxo

That's a great poem, I can relate, thanks for the comment. 5/5

Keep going nice work