Comments : X How Can I?

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Wow, seems different than your usual poems, though no less as intresting. Does that sound right? Well anyway, I like the last line the best and the first line. I could relate to some of this, not all of this, as I twsited it to how it fit for me ;) It had a nice flow though and nice organization and a great meaning. So hopefully, you keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    It has a good meaning and a good flow , excellent rhyme- scheme and relateable well some parts
    good poem :)


  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Impressed, I am
    Commented, I have

    This is very sad, especailly the last line

  • 18 years ago

    by *Chels & Britt*

    A little repetitive...but I like it. It conveys a true relationship...and though it may mean something completely different, to me it's like one person in a relationship cannot be happy if the other isn't...if that makes any sense :)
    Great poem! I especially liked your ending, very strong and it wrapped everything up nicely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Wow, deep poem, hidden meanings and all that - a really cool poem and an amazing read, I liked the line which started 'How can I....'


    I loved the whole poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved it. it was awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Awwww sooo sad!!!!! Great poem I liked it a lot!!!! last line is my fav.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Excellent work:)

    touching heart poem... I love this one :)