Wow, seems different than your usual poems, though no less as intresting. Does that sound right? Well anyway, I like the last line the best and the first line. I could relate to some of this, not all of this, as I twsited it to how it fit for me ;) It had a nice flow though and nice organization and a great meaning. So hopefully, you keep writing.

It has a good meaning and a good flow , excellent rhyme- scheme and relateable well some parts
good poem :)

~StefQ

Impressed, I am
Commented, I have

This is very sad, especailly the last line
*TEARS*

A little repetitive...but I like it. It conveys a true relationship...and though it may mean something completely different, to me it's like one person in a relationship cannot be happy if the other isn't...if that makes any sense :)
Great poem! I especially liked your ending, very strong and it wrapped everything up nicely.

Wow, deep poem, hidden meanings and all that - a really cool poem and an amazing read, I liked the line which started 'How can I....'

lol

I loved the whole poem.

I loved it. it was awesome.
xx

Awwww sooo sad!!!!! Great poem I liked it a lot!!!! last line is my fav.
~~Sweetie

Excellent work:)

touching heart poem... I love this one :)