"it can not be..."
[cannot]

"And sinec a broken life has no cure,"
[since]

'When did this all
go so wrong,' you'll ask yourself. 'When will anything seem right?
When will I be able to tell reality from my dreams...Maybe this
has all become a dream...'

[The answer to that question is simple. When you let go.]

"For we all new,"
[knew]

"Bu alas,"
[But]

"Suicidal Love"
[An oxymoron. You will never know of love if you're dead]

It seems like someone you love has died, and you are thinking of suicide. Which I think is absurd. Someone dies, and breaks hearts. What happens when you die, will you not break someone's heart? He did not know you loved him, so he did not know he broke your heart. If you committed suicide, you will never know who's heart you may break. I can see why you would lose the debate. I'm not quite sure the topic, but I can tell, it was indeed morbid, and also pathetic for an arguement. I wouldn't mind debating against you. I know I would win. Good poem[s] though. Sad story you do tell.

This was...Just.. It was.. I'm speechless. I absolutely love your writings and everything of yours I have read so far. It's all so greatly amazing. I don't think anyone could have written something so good.

I think it was awesome! (read the second one and my opinion remained the same ;) ) I love how you mixed prose with poetry, that was a really cool idea! And as to what comments you got on that Speech and Debate thing, all I have to say is that : morbid or not it still is a wonderful piece of art worth reading! :)
Keep up the good writing!
5/5