"I can not say, 'Help me.'"
['cannot']

"I've given mostly given up screaming;"
[I've mostly given up screaming;]

"to stop...but I can not...."
[cannot]

The poem about love was very true. I really liked that one, because it has one point of view. The second poem about life and death was really good, and I liked the images and description you put into it. Death gripping your throat, that was a very clear image. The last poem was alright, I really liked the rhymes in it. It's just, an unoriginal topic. However, you did do a better job than most people. Good stuff.

Oh my.. that is really great.. X please chek out ma poems!!