Comments : Our little secret

  • Wow!! thats quite intence!
    reli good tho well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephen

    Nice poem, I liked it, thanks for the comment I'll read some more of your poems and comment when I get the chance

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Hey sweetie I hope the next line would read Then he reached for protection, and it was only then I knew, he didn`t just care for my body ,he cared for my future too.
    OOPS! the mommy in me is showing.