Very good..... you have alot of good words in there i can never think of anything to ryhm with mine BEAUTIFULLY written :)

check out mine please x x x thanks

Very well written dear! its full of emotions..and tears are a part of emotions.....

well done

luv,
Bharti

Well the finished version was worth seeing!
This realy is very good, and how you restructured the last stanza is brilliant!!
Well done!

Jon
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This certainly has some dark/sad words which i think r coming out of ur pen for the first time, well let the sadness flow as it comes

all the best and take care
5/5