I really like this its so good... I think u did a good job of expressing that the people who God asked to do this and that weren't just strong... and they doubted themselves! I like it... put some music behind it and u got urself a song lol!

Very nice. God always has a plan and we're too stupid to see it or wait for it most of the time yet there so many proofs in the bible

Woah thats an awesome poem hun

Excellent written poem...message clearly showed...5/5