Really good poem. Couple of grammatical errors but nothing that wasn't overcome by the greatness of the poem.

And um....i'm not sure if i have anythin else to say...um....i have lots and lots of pic of my bro....i know ur gonna like that.....um....oh yeahh and this funny thing happened b4 i left but i can't tell u that now....nit the right place or time....lol....um....yeah i think thats it

Really nice poem! i luved it!!!!