I really loved it.. good job

POTATOE GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:) jajajaja

wonderful poem i liked the emotion it expresed.

byebyeee

pili

Dude. Awesome work. Loved it, great and depressing and dark. Just one crit. The word choice in the second line 'puffy eye' perhaps use a different word. But apart from that I was engrossed and impressed!

Woah so effing good.. i love it.. ur really good.. check out some of my poems n tell me wat u think coz i got a poetry contest at skool soon.. u think they r good enuf??

Awesome job sophie its really great.....