Hey, i liked this..it was amazing...it really made me think...very deep...i especially liked the lines

Optimistic is nothing but weak escape
Pessimistic is nothing but being a realist
Quest to know the unknown

that is so true and real...great job! 5/5
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Well done! I found this type of poem to be somewhat challenging. You did a great job on it.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Very good - I really enjoyed this poem.

Ever feel so lonely,
Feeling like no one cares
Gone like the wind,
Heaven is all we look for
I for one, am looking for it

I really liked these words! Nice job!