Thats rlly deep. i kno that emotion oh too well. nice wording and i loved the last line..ur a rlly awesome poet,
love ya lots,
sore

To me, when poems don't rhyme, they feel more real and the last line just made me think about myself so much. Thanks for sharing.

please if you can take a look at mine If not that's fine.

This is very good, I'm finding myself in a similar situation...because a lot of my poems are just feelings. BUT I liked this unique...yet scarily true...sometimes poetry is all the better free verse....you have clearly proven this...Brill...

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Thats a great poem. i like poems that rhyme usually, but that was really deep and i loved it. keep up the good work 5/5

Doesn't need rhymes, its really good without them.

It's alright. I mean it's not what I was expecting but it's still good. Is there something we need to talk about? I'm always here if you need to talk. Just IM me. ANyway you poem gets a 4.9/5