Wow that was really good read a few of my featured ones and comment and let me know how they are i will be keeping up on you nice work keep it up

Hehe, you still got it, Emma..You're really talented within this genre...:P

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Harald

Man that was too good. i almost forgot where i was for a minute lol. man u got some talent.

Damn!!! This is frickin hot!! Keep writing!!

Aye gurl dat shit was raw business for real. I liked it alot....keep doin wat u doin u got some freaky skills.

I am not a big fan of erotic poetry, but this one proved me wrong. Fantastic writing, keep it up!

Very detailed and intense!

One could rap this poem...try it, it's sounds awesome!