This is really nice. however, reading through, I thought

Fall wind blows gently thru
my hair, my head
Or the first virgin snow
or a summer storm

the line - Or the first virgin snow - seems abrupt in the flow. It is probably the word Or in the first line.

the thread of thought is really well done - I like the idea of the essence of love staying strong through time.

love and peace
shobhana

You were right Shobhana, The more I read it the more I didn't like it so I changed it. Thanks for the comment!!! Blessings- Christy

I thought this flowed well and beautiful imagery!!!