Your unique style creates vivid imagery. I can see why this one was picked as one of your favorites.
5/5 Awesome Write!!

Superb write

nice story really deep and captivating

5/5

~GLASS~

I have to say this poem touched my soul. It was one of thee best! Definately counts as one of my top favorites written by young poets. It was simple, but absolutely beautiful.

I love it you have a way with words you are very talented

Oh, you are one of the best poets i know, the poems you write, and especially this one are feeled with emotion that i can really feel. keep writing.
xxxx

This poem, I think, had a good deal of imagery and it was really good. I pictured everything you wrote in this poem.

It is a very well structured poem with a good flow. Good job.

The idea of a painting forming as i read the poem gave it new depth. the im not sure if the last line works. it seems to almost cheapen the effect it was forming.

Ruby

WOW! really loved it! specially these lines...

"Crystal water calming the fears
Which became volcanoes in your soul."

just Beautiful!!!!