It's a really good poem. There are some places I feel like it's a bit hard to read, but maybe it's just me. Even so, it's well written and I like it alot. ^_^ *5*

*BrokenToy

Nice write....very romantic,,,,both of u did a gr8 job..5/5

luv,
Bharti

Wow very nice, as above very romantic and full of emotion, and also someone above said it didnt flow in places...but when does love or life ever flow well...i think it shows alot of feelings very nicely!!

Well done

Jon
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Great! I feel the same way. Good stuff. ;)