Thanks Sunny dear, you are correct... Updated :)

Breathtaking Simon :) Emotional and sad, wonderful!

SIMON WOW!!!!!!!! I LOVED the flow of this poem! That was awsome, but I hope this is not true!! Sometimes poets right about their friends or familys pain or sitation and I hope this isn't true for them either, but I'm praying its not about you! Beautiful write yet so sad!

Beautiful but sad at the same time. The flow was amazing and the word choice did not seem forced in the slightest.

Wow...the scary part is...i know exactly how that feels...i love this poem...its really good

I love it!!! i can totally relate!!! niec work!! keep it up!!

Simply beatiful.
goood work:)

U KICK ASS LOL

~*♥*~wow, that is really good, I know how you feel...~*♥*~

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Sorry bout that..

Woow I luved it
very simple and beautiful!!!!
keep up the good work!
much luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

I know how it feels

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So much intenise and sad
I know exactly what you mean
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey, this was really good!! keep writing! Great job! -megan

Been there; it saays it all!Write on dude!

Simply beautiful penned, though sad but well writen, "today is always here, tomorrow, never." you do take care, love gloria's glen.

HI,
I love the poem.
CAn you right me a poem to give to this guy. I want to tell him that my feelings will go away in time. He knows i have deep feelings for him but they will go away so i want him to know that. I love reading poetry but i am hopeless when it comes to writing.
Thanks so much.
SOPHIE xxx!!!

Beautiful poem, i loved it!!

It was a really good poem
there were some screwed up parts