Wow reminds me of one of my situations now
I liked the way it didnt have to rhyme to be good :)

Excellent poem great job keep it up

Wow nice work keep it up

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I don't know about the last stanza but the rest of them were really powerful.

Not the best I've read from ya, but it still blows my poems out of the water. Amazing lit you've written.

Very definitive poem. I don't think it's one of your best but it's better than a lot of other writers could do.

Very powerfully written peice

5./5