I wasn't feelin this poem at all.....it was written with too many grammatical errors i think it would help if you could practice typing....and maybe spelling also....

Hey i liked it, dont worry abt the comment u had previously, as for me its the feelings that matters more than the spellings and how it has been written and i must admit that u hv xpressed ur feelings very well here.

all the best and take care
5/5