Well....I just logged on and saw your name and I just KNEW it HAD to be a mistake...lol It's nice to see you on here again. Very nice! Your poetry was definitely missed...I hope this isn't just a quick tease...then boom you're gone again...
People always tell you to face your fears ...in fact we've all probably told other people to do it as well...easier said then done! You've written of overcoming a fear very well...simply yet very creative...I always enjoyed your writing and I am thoroughly pleased to see a new one! Take Care...I'll be talking to ya....
I get the idea, but it kinda didn't make sense. And the paragraphs (Or whatever you call them) didn't really match, and that took away. It went from 6 to 4 to 2 to 0 lines. And you broke up the lines to soon. Maybe you could try to do better next time, but it really wasn't the best, sorry to say
Great poem. i love the second last verse. it make me smile and also makes me think how wonderful it is to have someone standing beside you helping you thro troubles. may everyone have that person. nice work. god bless and take care
Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate