Comments : Drowning the Fear

  • 15 years ago

    by aga

    Wow Heather! This is really a piece of art!
    I just cant believe in what i read its so amazing!
    Three words: [I] [L][O][V][E] [I][T]
    Keep it up this is amazing

  • 15 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Well....I just logged on and saw your name and I just KNEW it HAD to be a mistake...lol It's nice to see you on here again. Very nice! Your poetry was definitely missed...I hope this isn't just a quick tease...then boom you're gone again...

    People always tell you to face your fears ...in fact we've all probably told other people to do it as well...easier said then done! You've written of overcoming a fear very well...simply yet very creative...I always enjoyed your writing and I am thoroughly pleased to see a new one! Take Care...I'll be talking to ya....

  • 15 years ago

    by Catherine

    I get the idea, but it kinda didn't make sense. And the paragraphs (Or whatever you call them) didn't really match, and that took away. It went from 6 to 4 to 2 to 0 lines. And you broke up the lines to soon. Maybe you could try to do better next time, but it really wasn't the best, sorry to say

  • 15 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey this poem was great
    its been a long time since we've talked, idk if u remember me, but hi!
    it was great

  • 15 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 15 years ago

    by KaT

    Heather, do you have a website with all your poems? i;m a huge fan of yours. i love the way you write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    Great poem. i love the second last verse. it make me smile and also makes me think how wonderful it is to have someone standing beside you helping you thro troubles. may everyone have that person. nice work. god bless and take care
    keanna xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Hey.. awesome read havent talked 2 u in awhile.. come check out my new stuff.. bye

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa Aka Mimi♥

    Awesome poem 5/5 sweety

  • 14 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)