Comments : White ash

  • 18 years ago

    by blue eyed brat

    I liked that poem. it seems to have a lot of meaning in it. keep up the gud work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    I love this perspective also, on the soldiers of war. That's what I took from this, anyway. Gosh, you have such beautiful lines! I get jealous sometimes of your writing lol. Excellent. Positively amazing.. there's not much more to say.