I liked it too. i thought the simplicity and shortness of the lines made it easy to read and the general theme was kool.
Thanks for commenting on my poem "the pencil that brojke my heart" it meant heaps. Rock on!
-Suzie

I really like it.Well written

TY every1 4 ur commentz i rlly appreciate them, they atleast tell me i have a sllight talent -smirk-