I really like your poems they are so kewl!!!! well bye again lol

I love this poem. Ita kinda how i feel bout someone. Its awsome. keep it up your good.

Hey I totally luved this one!!!
so emotional, I mean in a sad way..I luved how you wrote it. keep writing and welcome to the site. u know your work will be THE BEST when you read others poems, if you needed to read sum ppl's work whom I think they're GREAT, well, just tell me ;)
keep up this talent
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

The first couple of verses captured my attention, I liked how the words went well together,
The picture you painted with your words was foggy, I could see but not engage upon your words, in other words 'feel' your words,
the ending I thought there was something missing, not really sure what thought
I do like how you write, you show lots of promise