This is such a sweet poem, the friend to which it is about is indeed very dear. But this "kindest sweetest girl" experiences so many things I as a teenager can relate to. Fav stanza:

"Would they love you if you were ugly?
Would they love you if you were poor?
Would they love you in you were unique?
Because I would love you even more"

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Kind off a bit in some lines but I think it shows things people can relate to. As someone pointed out the stazas, they were beautifully done and showed the questions we should ask ourselves.

"I don't think he say the sweetness in your heart" i think it should be "saw" not "say"

"There only looking for a good time" It should be "they're" not "there"

"Whether there Lying you can never tell" again "there" should be "they're"

"Would they love you in you were unique?" I think it should be "if" not "in"

I liked this poem a lot. It definitely had some strong monologue elements, and got a very effective message across even with rhyme. My only critique concerns rhythmic inconsistancies, especially when you were trying to fit too many words in a line to finish a phrase or a rhyme. Good poem though.

A very nice lighthearted poem - which makes a change, lol. I enjoyed reading it, keep up the great work : )

Its sweet and creates a very good point. i wish some people would see this type of thing. awesomeness. keep it up

Nice poem, you have great talent.

Great poem. really enjoyed it...good advice too. Jpoet*

Just wanted to say your 2nd to last stanza was my fav! Jpoet*