Wow. Impressive.

Very beautiful. Nice written. It's excellent.

Very sad though =*(

Keep it up
Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

This was a very sad poem. It was well written and really touching as you can just imagine how many woman all over the world are living this same sad story... My fav lines were

She ducks and dives..
Doges and swerves..
But he still bruises..
All of her curves..

This really created a sick sense of imagery for me and I almost cringed knowing that you are prolly describing some woman's fate at this very moment....Good write and strong message...5/5!

I Love You Poem It Is So Good!!
Keep up the great work!!

This is a great poem... So sad, tormenting and heart breaking!!

Wow, Luke! This is so powerfully sad! The flow was perfect, awesome wording! Excellent write!