Wow i really liked that it was truely deep and so good
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D. so did everthing change or what?
this made me want to cry.
calls me tonight!

That was really good, yeah. It made sense and was emotional and from the heart. keep it up
xxxx

Aw this is so sad. i went through a similar experience when i was a little younger..and you are doing the best thing by letting him go. just stay strong. I loved this poem..you did a great job expressing your emotions. 5/5**
Stay Strong!

Wow, a tragic story of how age seperates us all in so many ways. Very well written.

I love reading love poems and i truly loved reading this poem...tremendous job!!!!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
great
specially the last line said it all
u reminded me of my past,
great job
5/5 and keep the great job

Although this stumbled with the flow it was still a good write. It is always difficult when a relationship ends but this poem had a lovely sad yet philosophical feel to it.