Comments : It was the love of a lie...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    That was confusing! but i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Layna*~

    This was nice...lol. Hey...Im sitting right next to you. Dont look at me. Hey turn yourslef. QUIT LOOKING AT ME. Anyway about the poem. It was good. It was good. But listen I didn't like the rhyming pattern. It was too strong. I told you that because you are my best friend and I thought that you could handle it. OKAY BYE BYE! BYE NOW! OKAY...BYE!

  • 18 years ago

    by krysten

    I liked it although it was confusing for me too. I liked the ryhming an it was set up really nice.