Great write, Beesley.

I am amazed that you would write a great poem even with all the bad obstacles in front of you. It truly shows how much courage and will you have, truly you have shown me what "strong determination and will" is.

Again great write Steven.

Yes... This has a mild hint of hope seeping out the seams. You will get through this, your will is strong!!! A great poem reflecting this!

Some good rhymes, great structure and a well written and touching poem, well done, keep it up.