Comments : X Forever Falling, Never Free

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    "
    I didn't mean to cause you harm"
    That line broke the flow up a bit - hmrrmmmr
    lalala
    I love the poem
    I love horses
    So we are all happy, comprede???

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey, I like this poem.

    Nice written. Very well done!

    Lotsaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Dowlly

    I really enjoyed this poem, and i think it flowed really well. top marks

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Good stuff....

    I was wondering, I haven't seen your wings off late...is everything alright?

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, it flowed well and was nice to read.
    xxxxxx