I liked this alot; especially the boy/girl rhymes and what went on with them

I love that poem... the grade levels is tight i would have never thought to do that

It's different and because of that it makes it more original than a lot of love poems I've read. The basic structure was pretty good with the grades and what happened. Seeing the characters "grow up"

Awww... thats sweet! i loved the idea of them growing up and each step of the way, it is very unique and cute! the only thing is that i felt i was waiting for more.. for the end of the story kind of.. lol.. but i really liked it! keep up the good work! :)
jessy

I've read this one b4 and meant to comment... my bad! this is so cute and pretty typical i reckon!! love ur work keep it up!