The ending is great...breaking the normal poetry rythem and comming in with an awsome one liner...very good. 5/5

Short and to the point. Just how I liked it. I liked how you described each one. Really well done! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Very strong and powerful! I can relate! Great job! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Again this is a great piece and the last line just blew my mind unexcpected but great,
again 5/5