Wow this is a gr8 poem i love it i dont give u a 5 i give u a 10 keep up the good work!!!!! :)
Takecare and thank u for the comment,
Thalia

This has got to be my favorite one.
i can relate to this so much.
it reminds me of and lads who makes me feel exactly like your written words.
brill work mate
10/10 this time loved it

Check typos and grammatical stuff (like missing apostrophes). without them sometimes it's hard to read a poem properly. i really like it, although the last line (chills me to my core) doesn't seem to fit - but perhaps that's just me. it seems to only work because it rhymes. *shrug*

"but cant bare to let me go"
can't needs an apostrophe, and I think 'bear' is the word you want instead of 'bare'. (bear = to tolerate, bare = uncovered)
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I thought you rhymed very well, and did a good job on this poem. The message was very clear and unobscured.

First of all, if you're wondering why I'm doing this poem and not the others you asked, it's because I've done them already, with the name -^->TaLe3e! ..yeah. Just click on that name and it will take you to this same profile. =)

Anywho, back to the poem. I liked it! I thought the flow was really good and the rhyming didn't seemed forced. Lots of emotions aswell, which is always good! A great job overall. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``