Beautiful! The flow is great and the poem overall is wonderful. Your emotions and thoughts conveyed well :)

Hey, i like this..it flows really nice and makes a lot of sense, i can relate..keep it up!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

I loved it. thank you for continueing to write when so many of us, including myself have drifted away from it~
britt

Awesome flow! At first glance I expected it to be choppy.
I also like the whimsical and airy feel to this....very nice.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

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Oh My, it has been a while since I've read anything by you and I have to say that I truly love this write. The rhyme and flow are wonderful and the words truly make you think......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Awesome Write. The was great. Keep up the good work.

~Joe~

The rhyme and the flow within this one are great....I loved this truly a beautiful write.

Love Ann

This is reli beautiful.. intriguing rhyme scheme, but effective, nonetheless.. loved ur words... reli causes the reader to contemplate life and one's own thoughts..it was short, but to the point.. tho a little misleading and confusing.. gr8 job tho
take care
NannO

You are so great in writing and you know whay you write, i love each poem written by you cause they are full of true feelings.

I like this poem lots but think you have mis-spelt some-thing wrong in the second line!! wondeful poem though!