Hey Stephenie,
My name is Cindy and I really like this poem gurl! This just a good poem!!!! 5/5

Hey hey! ok well.. holy crap! this is GREAT! 5/5 for sure. long, and free verse but keeps you reading and wanting more.

\"Theres a lie on my lips,
Theres a tear in my laugh\"

Brilliant:) Keep it up.:) hehe

Monique
xoxox luv you