Comments : A RoSe

  • 16 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    OMG.... Girl this is just amazing!!!! WOW... me enamore de este poema.. my fav part :

    You came to my house
    and gently knocked on the door
    you hugged me, looked at me and said
    "I cant be without you anymore"

    a rose you held out..
    as i took it from your hand
    none of my feelings
    acted out as planned

    Me encanto.... I missed your poems really bad... im sort of in like writters block mode... GOD is frustrating... ok 5/5 cus WOW you did MADDDD good... lovededed it. *kiss*... miss u......