This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer

That was a wonderful poem, very sweet and loving, well written and flowed good, keep it up ,your friend Tracy d 5/5

Hey! nice poem! well written, good flow, lovely imagery! really beautiful.

Hihi
this was super awesome
the flow was nice and i liked the ryhming (Y)
its really sweet.

5/5

tc. cindy