I especialy like the two last lines in your poem

I love this poem! it's short but it's still very expressive. Brilliant work and great ending. 5/5!

This is very direct and it really involves the reader the way you use "you" a lot throughout the poem. It's short but very dramatic, well done.

I change my mind this one is my fav....

Yep. You are just great.
I hope that you understand how many people there are out there that are going through the same thing. I know it's hard to realize but one of these days, you will look through the smoke and see the mirror and realize that you aren't alone. I'm always here if you want to talk.
(:
5/5

-Britney