Comments : Love changes all

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    So true! I can definately relate :)

    Of what I once ware

    I don't understand . . .

    But lovely flow and rhyming, really enjoyed reading it.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Title: At first it seemed like a love poem until I saw what section it was in. A good hooking title though
    concept: Enving those who weren't hurt but shouldn't they envy us who have loved :)
    I think it's great and powerful emotionally but I'd try rereading these parts:
    Till the moment comes when they see what I see (It runs a bit long)
    Of what I once ware (I don't understand)

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Amazing write! I loved it. The Flow was awesome. good Job.

    ~Joe~