Hey!
im da 1st one to giv it a comnt :D
wel wt can i say its brilliant bt den agn u did it so it was bound 2b :)
lve ya hun
xmwahx

Hae dats a reli kul poem totally relate

Um...i don't really know what the message was? i'm not really into "slang" poetry. this piece seems broken up; but, i enjoyed some of your vocabulary and ability to rhyme.
good write.

It was good. I'm not really into slang poetry so I knew going in to read this I probably wasn't going to like it too much. The content was good and so was the vocab. It was broken up pretty good as well.