Wow you rly shouldnt ptu ur bf through this i think that you shoudl poss think of hooking up wit him..but yet thats kind of weird he makes you cry yet you think you love him...i wish you the best of luckk..adn i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem...pleaseeeeeeee write more. And feel free to check out my stuff...lataz'

lissa

I wish I could write a poem that good!

Real Sweet!! I love it!! You are either really hurt or really in love witht his person...

I challenge you to write a poem about yourself 10 years from now. Write in in a tense as though you are really there. A glimpse of the perfect day with your man. Be detailed describe why it is that you are so happy. what it is you want it to be like. what he's like.

writing down your wants and desires is VERY powerful. and I see you have a talent for writing what you feel.

God Bless...