Lost in the marshmallow clouds of reality
First off, thanks very much I am freakin craving marshmellows now lol....

Secondly, well done on this peice Katie!!! I just loved how in every other line you took dreams and compared them with something, I love the repunzels hair part, thats excellent use of imagery and I really love poems like that! Keep dreaming Katie God gave us woman the strength to over come anything, depression shouldn't and didn't win, live your dreams!
Chelsey-Lynn

I agree with Chelz....... keep dreaming, don't ever stop and try and follow those dreams if you can. You're a winner Katie, just like this poem is a winner. You didn't let the depression get you down, you're fighting it and carrying on with your life. I beat depression too...... so keep on dreaming sweetie and keep on writing too, you've got amazing talent.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I LOVE this piece. i don't often say that, either.

but this poem was very fun, very deep, very simple, and very true.

"lost in the marshmallow clouds of reality"
i love this line, it triggers so many sensory images and buries the reader deep in thought.

very, very well written.

Great peice, well written with some brilliant use of imegry and concepts.

5/5

More great imagery here but again, a few too many words. the rhyming is good. xx

Hey thats really good. im a dreamer. my brother hates it. he's very realistic about everything. so this poem is great. i love this line:
Write poetry from your heartstrings as long as rapunzels hair

awww rapunzel. and the hair and heartstrings awesomeness. :)

Awesome poem Katie. I just loved the imagery that you used in this piece. And of course the message is priceless. I'm a dreamer as well...dream on sister! You've got skillz girl! Good job:)