Thats really good!! A 5!!

AWSOMEEE NESSS!!! LOL haha omg lisa i need u :(:( my brothers gf is being sent to the hospital from my house and i dunno whats wrong with her

Wow thats really good great job

I'm sorry to say it but... you stun me
beautiful, amazing and so very deep.

You seem to have a talent for writing, very well done.

And soon it's like breathing.
The lies just come out.
[My favorite lines]

You're right, it's not your best, but that doesn't mean it's not good. It really is... But why is it in the explicit part? Maybe I missed something..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very good. I really liked this poem. My favorite stanza was the last one:

"She could only go forward.
Cause the past has gone by.
And to think this all started,
With one little lie."

Very good ending. Anyway, 5/5. Keep up the good work :)

~BJ~

Great, wonderful,excellent poem! The structure the flow the emotion it was all there and it was all on que!!

-AnnMarie

Another grat job by you.

Well to me i found the poem nice! it has meaning in it, that once u start something small it would always grow to something big, and i like the way you could add that meaning to your poem using a simple lie!

Keep it up!5/5

Yet another 5/5 from me.

Its ok