Very well written. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

Sounds like me when i wake up late..haha

I wake up and I'm feeling drowsy,
already assuming my day will be lousy.

thats me. hah

I get out of the shower, after half an hour,
and find that my electric toothbrush is out of power.

I loved those lines - they put a smile on my face! However, it seems unfinished . . I think you should finish this poem off . . .

Peace. [Sole]

The poem seems not finished... the idea is fantasic. very f8unny. maybe write some more?/ fantastic though. the flow was pretty good. very well waritten, and a good rhymeing pattern

4/5
Ruby

The rhyming of this poem sounds really great but the ending is kinda not as good as rest of the poem. It was like an anti-climax. good job anyway and keep writting!

Lol i kno the feeling that kinda happened to me this morning. gr8 work very tru 5/5

Hmmm.
Wasn't particularly good.
3/5
sorry just didn't float my boat.
~Wings