OMG...... I love it, you both did a great job on this one..... wooooooo hoooooo makes me wanna sing, ring my beeeeeell, ring my bell, lol.....

Congrats Chels to yourself and Sunny for a brilliant collaborative poem. Loved it loved the imagery, the soft romance in your words, the passion. A true pleasure to read as always my darling keep up the great work.

OMG Chels ....you and Sunny have done a magnificent job on this collab .I just love it !

Which reminds me ....we must do another collab together again soon....

Hugs & kisses baby girl XXXXXX

Woww i loved it . amazing imagery

Very good poem. just love the way you write. good job

AWEME POEM I LOVE IT WID ALL MI HEART. UR A AWESME WRITER SO DNT STOP WRITING!!!!

THANK YOU SO MCH FOR YOU COMMENT IT MEANT SO MUCH TO MI

HANNAHXOXO

Good poem bout a man next door that u really liked

Haha awsome poem great job :) 5/5

WOW...HOW CAN I TELL SUNNY WAS APART OF THIS POEM...

you did an awsome joh girly....i really loved it it made me smile the whole way threw and the subject was really odd which made it one of those perfect poems...you both did a great job and should be proud of yourselves.

lots of love
miss.scooby

Wow, very detailed poem. very sweet

one mistake though- suagrcanes

Haha this is awesome! Its got some humor to it of course, but its still REALLY good! Keep up the good work! 5/5
~emily

Kool poem!!!

ii &heart' that poem!!
5/5

Oo, i love it.
i want a tarzan that i can watch swing from ropes with only a little cloth on. m-m-m!
haha.
;]

Wow I love how you describe this guy who swept you off your feet with the comparison with tarzan.I mean not many would associate their love to tarzan and jane but you have done a great job here.keep it up

This is super cute! Gosh i loved this :) :)