Comments : Out of my reach

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    This wasn't bad but it's defiently not your best I would love for you to write longer poems I think they would be great, just one or two more verses

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "walking is all that you all u are good at"

    should be something like
    'walking is all that you are good at'
    and the ending was good, except you shouldn't use the word 'just' all the time. Use it for the first one, then leave it out for the other lines.

    This isn't a bad poem at all. Just needs a few touch ups. But keep writing!